Keitaro Nakamura done

Name:Keitaro Nakamura
Gender:Male
Rank:Vasto Lorde
Race:Hollow
Appearence:Keitaro Nakamura is the very picture of an attractive, sophisticated man in the prime of life. With his dark, piercing eyes and clean-shaven, babyfaced visage, the infamous hollow attracts a great deal of attention from admirers. Keitaro's dark hair - perhaps in keeping with his persona - is worn casually unkempt, falling over his eyes; in more formal or somber situations, however, he is known to wear it neatly slicked back. A great fan of classy attire, Nakamura is rarely seen out of uniform (and even while in uniform will often don other impressive accoutrements, such as a long, black overcoat and white formalwear gloves), but when dressed in civilian clothes, he appears rather partial to the three-piece suit and black tie (frequently coupled with classic scarves, polished dress shoe and the aforementioned overcoat and gloves). It may be interesting to note that Keitaro tends toward dark or neutral colors in his dress, such as dark blue, brown and black tempered with minimal white.

History:
Keitaro was born into a poor famliy his parents had to work two job's for him to goto school he was a B and C student when he entred high school he took a likeing to foot ball to where it landed him a scolership for sports he did not how ever enter foot ball instead going to learn kendo he soon became a deadly force with a sword called the flaming kendo master because he struck so fast the blade had heat to it he just recently died in a car crash how ever. Before a shinigami could get to him a hollow had killed him making him a hollow. While roy started out being the same he soon started to devour human souls but that wasent enough he soon started to eat fellow hollows after two years of eating hollows he had reached the class of Gillian. He how ever was smart enough to keep going on he devoured hollows mostly haveing eatin now over a thousand hollow in the corse of six years he advanced to the class of Adjuchas. He wasent happy being called the "middle class of hollows." He was gonna reach for a Vasto Lorde he had started to not only devour hollows but shinigami as well. He had started out with young academy students then moved on to captins of corse he had goten them while they were distracted. Keitaro how ever found a way to reach the Vasto Lorde rank. A shinigami captain and a Vasto Lorde were at a stand still both to tired to move any more Keitaro walked to the shinigami and devored him first the rushed to the Vasto Lorde and devoured him next. He felt the power flow through him as a more human like form took over his arm now that of a skeletans he smirked. It has been a year since then he watches over the other hollows feeding when needed he protects them from any shingami that might come into his forest.

Unique abbilities:Shi-en Controle of fire must have a sorce of fire near him.

Looks fine o.o Accepted unless said so my Naga or Kimi

I see it's fine, the only problem I have with it is the name.

I'm lazy with names sorry i can pick another one if ya want ^^;.

Why not just make it the name you registered with?
"Keitaro Nakamura"?

Eh i use that name on most sites so i wanted to use somethin' new but alright ^^.

Do what you wish.